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Redline?by *MageMutt

Digital Art / Pixel Art / Characters / Non-Isometric

It's a wolf in this pic, but feel free to offer advice for other species as well.

This year, I'm going to try to improve my anatomy. You can redline this, if you want, and give helpful tips. I want my style to still be cartoon-ish, but anatomically correct.

You can also give critiques here on the anatomy and tell me what I can fix.

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=TakeABowXOXO Mar 5, 2013 Student Digital Artist

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Sorry it's kind of messy :'D
My feral anatomy leaves something to be desired, but I gave it a shot
The main problem I can see is basically just your paws and hind legs
The "wrists" of the legs are very thin, and make the paws look rather detached
My best suggestion for that is just to look up some images of paws or paw references; there's a good number of them on deviantart that have really been a huge help in my own growing process
as far as the hind leg goes, you just made the upper part, or rather the thigh, a tad large, creating a humped back.

I'm bad at closing these things, but if you have any questions or what not, feel free to ask
Feel free to take this with a grain of salt :'D

*MageMutt Mar 6, 2013

Thanks for the help c:
Hind legs really give me trouble sometimes.

=TakeABowXOXO Mar 6, 2013 Student Digital Artist

No problem c:

~FoodStamps1 Feb 14, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

so you want us to download the image then edit it with helpful hints? . w . id be happy to help!

*MageMutt Feb 14, 2013

Yeah ^^

~FoodStamps1 Feb 14, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

aweosme! ^^ ill help chu out > w >

=Mikufresa Jan 25, 2013 Student Digital Artist

_{Still need help? uvu}

*MageMutt Jan 25, 2013

Yes

I'm always open for tips/advice on my anatomy.

=Mikufresa Jan 26, 2013 Student Digital Artist

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I made it today in like 20 mins so it looks kinda crappy |D but hope it helps!}

*MageMutt Jan 26, 2013

Thanks

Didn't know the back didn't have a curve

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